Maurice Ravel's music is very innovative,it doesn't sound like most of the classical music that was produced during the 1900's. The tone of his music is both happy and sad! In some songs the tone is very calm and quite but if you fast forward there are song that are very dramatic and loud.
Ravel's music is pleasing but is not what i usually listen to,to compare Ravel's music to the music of the 20th century is like comparing water to pop, the water is very calm,soothing,and boring but the pop is carbonated,full of life and more upbeat! To fully understand Ravel's music i feel as if i would have to research him and find out more about how he lived his life,then maybe i would be able to make more of a connection to him and his music.
Overall Maurice Ravel music isn't the worse thing I've ever heard,im in orchestra so this i can cope with i just wish it was more upbeat,something i could bob my head to!
A little brief, especially since you never mention which of his works you are writing about! Write more specifically to one work.
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Idea 2 <-- not sure what you're referencing
Organization 2 <-- right idea for paragraphs, but write specifically to the works
Voice 4 <-- very personable!
Diction 3
Fluency 3
Conventions 2 <-- capitalization and punctuation issues
Research na
Blog Format 3 Looks fine. Divide the paragraphs by a line space.
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